Hi, Amber, this was a great story to read. I think it's awesome that pine needles are what inspired you to write this piece.
Hello YaYa! I think that this is a great story that you have written. I had no idea that you were such a big fan of dolphins:)
Hi Ana, I thought that this was a very well written story. You are very good at creating a mental image for the reader:)
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